Thursday, June 5, 2008

The Talking Cat - Jordie Beres


Character: A talking cat

Object: A box

Topic deserted by his friends

Setting: An Egyptian tomb

Once upon a time there was a man called Mr Beres he was very interested in Egyptology he liked digging for ancient jelery from the year 1500. He had just booked tickets on a plane to Egypt. In the plane he borrowed a book on Egyptian tombs he read a section about treasure it said that ten steps forward from the temple of doom and if you dug 400 metres into the ground you would find a great treasure a box with the treasure inside Mr Beres badly wanted to find that treasure when he got his luggage he ran of and rented a dune buggy and raced of to the temple of doom he immediately stepped ten steps forward from the temple of doom and dug. About ten hours later he found this box from inside the box he thought he heard a voice from inside when he opened the box out sprang a talking cat. Mr Beres fainted when he woke up all he saw was this ginger cat with blue eyes sleeping on him the cat just said hello I’m a talking cat Iv been here for 5000 years I was deserted by my friends all because I told them there was treasure in the temple of doom he wanted all the treasure to himself so he buried me here in my sleep so he decided to adopt the cat he called him Boris and they lived happily ever after

The end

By Jordie Beres

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Jordie. That story was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How did he survive 5000 years?

Anonymous said...

Very intersting story Jordie, well written, keep up the good work. Lots of love Mum

Anonymous said...

Great story Jordie, very interesting. Keep up the good work. Lots of love Mum.