A boy called Bob was on holiday in Egypt with his family and some friends. One day they were visiting a tomb. His parents went off to see another tomb but Bob and his friends decided to stay for a bit longer. They looked around for a bit longer but then his friends went off and the door slammed shut behind them. Bob was trapped. He sat down for a while, then all of a sudden a cat walked out and said “Wazzup” then Bob started running away. The cat said “I can help you get out”. “Ok” said Bob eagerly. So the cat showed him a stone that slid out so that he could crawl through and then he lived happily ever after til five minutes later when he walked off the cliff.
By Sean
By Sean
2 comments:
Hi sean i thought your story was really funny it was funny when he walked of the cliff In thought it could have been longer
Sean you story caught my attention. It created mystery at first. Loved to have read about what Bob may have seen, heard or smelt inside the tomb when the door slammed shut. I wonder how Bob was feeling. What type of cat appeared? Have you researched what cats the Ancient Egyptians kept?
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