Thursday, July 3, 2008

Ollie the Octopus - Meg McKay and Sarah Whitmore


Character: octopus
Plastic surgery
At cross roads
Glowing mirror

One day down in the sea there was a octopus called Ollie. He was a very nice octopus, he liked to swim around the ocean. He didn’t have any friends because they thought that he was ugly. He was not the usual octopus he had nine tentacles his eyes were like a humans and he had freakishly weird glasses. He was not the usual colour an octopus would be, he was bright green!!! He also attracted sharks because he glowed in the dark sea water. So he thought why doesn’t he get plastic surgery? So he drove in his yellow sumerin, yellow sumerin, yellow sumerine. He went past the shop, under the seaweed, over the sand castle, and through the cross roads. At the end of the swimming lane he saw the octo-clinic. He saw a big a big glowing mirror, glowing back at him. In the surgery room there were a lot of ig objects that he had never seen before. He was very nervous. He felt like running out when he saw the needle. They gave Ollie an injection. As soon as they gave him the injection he fell asleep. The doctors started tacking Ollies ninth leg off and putting false eyes instead of the humans eyes. They also took the glow out of him. He had to go back and forth to the octo- clinic for two weeks. Past the shop, under the seaweed, over the sand castle and through the cross roads, day after day. In the end he did not like his new self. Infact he hated himself, but everyone else loved his new look. They thought it was fab. So now Ollie has a lot of new friend s. He is very happy. But there is still one thing wrong……………….. he is GREEN!!!